RJA #10b : Argument

Here is my argument for my research topic :

"A teacher is a role model for the individual. They
have a direct as well as a indirect impact on how
a person will function in society for the rest of
their lives. For one to want to become a teacher,
they must make the oath to want to be involved
in human development, and the key word is
"want". They are making a very important
committment. Thus, when making such a
oath to themselves they should teach where
ever they are needed the most. Sure, there is
by no means nothing wrong with wanting to
teach in whatever district they want to try to
teach in, but sometimes they are most needed
in schools that are poorer. Since there are a
large number of teachers being reassigned to
districts they may not want to be in, they may
not be teaching at their full capacity and may
be disgruntled which may have a negative
impact on the students and staff. However, if
a teacher that is reassigned is fairly and maybe
even over compensated for their forced re-
assignments, they are more likely to perform
better and maintain a positive attitude about
the move and work harder in districts where
the students are faced with problems at, and
away from school. In other words, they will
live up to their personal committment of
wanting to teach.